Are books more important than experience?
Without any doubt, books are the main sources of knowledge and provide us much information in different areas. Definitely, some people if asked would agree with the statement that the books are more important than experience while others have a negative attitude. In my perspective, although, the books give us the necessary knowledge in different fields practice experience has greater importance. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on arguments to supporting my view.
First of all, many of knowledge that we learn from books are theoretical concepts and rude knowledge that we need experience them with practice them, again and again, to use them in the real world. For example, you may read a lot of information about mathematics equation but until you solve several equations you won't understand how much you know about this subject.
The second reason for that is knowledge gain from experience can stay at mind long period. To illustrate this idea lets consider the following example. Many of lessons that we remember from school age that one's trained us in practical courses, for example, I still remember lesson which was about the function of heart because my teacher took us to the lab and we did some experiments on rabbit heart.
Finally, to get position jobs you have to have practical experience in a specific area otherwise you don’t have any chance to get the job. For instance, many of company that works in the field of computer usually hire people with programming experience because just knowing much information about computer will useless.
By way of conclusion, in spite of the fact that we cannot ignore the main role of books as an important source of knowledge but base on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that in most cases experience is more important than books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...perience is more important than books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, still, while, for example, for instance, you know, first of all, in most cases, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68337868499 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2077219009 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 5.45110844103 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287298775099 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106017363885 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133841561108 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176559831928 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144647233303 0.0645574589148 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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