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Since our childhood, we are constantly told to be honest. And here is a claim that always telling the truth is the paramount consideration in any relationship between people. As far as I am concerned, telling the truth is significant in building relationship with others. But in some cases, telling a lie can be reasonable as well depending on the situation.
To begin with, honesty can gain other's trust which is fundamental in any relationship. Maintaining the love is definitely the case in point. Love is based on promises. If we do not keep the promise, the relationship between the two lovers can be jeopardized. The same is true with other types of relationships. If the president always tells lies, he will never win the support from the people he or she serves. He may even end up being strongly opposed if he or she doesn't keep his or her word. For instance, the economic situation was terrible this year, but the president just hid the truth in order to mask his or her incapability. When the fact was revealed later, not only will his or her fame get ruined but also his or her position will be undermined.
However, there might exist some situations in which telling a lie is more suitable. Sometimes we want to kindly help others, but we do not want others to know. This is what we usually refer to as the white lie. In some cases, it does help others a lot and still maintain the tie with others. My experience can fully illustrate this point. Last time my best friend Tony asked me if I have any cigarette. I lied to him saying I didn't, but actually I had one pack of cigarettes in my bagpack. I did so because he needs to keep away from smoking. He had a bad lung and just went on a surgery. I didn't want him to recidivate so I lied to him for the sake of his health. Although I lied to him, our friendship is still as strong as before. Therefore, telling a white lie can sometimes be beneficial to others without jeopardizing the relationship with them.
To summarize, telling the truth is essential in most occasions. If we don't tell the truth, we will never build the firm relationship with others. Nonetheless, telling a lie can be conducive in some special situations.
- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 70
- Starting in the 1960s and continuing until the 1980s, sailors in Russian submarines patrolling the North Atlantic and Arctic Ocean would occasionally hear strange sounds. These underwater noises reminded the submarine crews of frog croaks, so they called 76
- When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects. 70
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. 70
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children 88
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5351758794 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.778008346 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522613065327 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7345158517 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.4642857143 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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