Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize

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Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

Throughout life's long and tortuos journey, our adolescence period is of utmost importance in terms of determining our personality, social status, field of work or study, and our future success and prosperity in life. Besides, with the advent of extraordinary new and innovative technologies, such as the internet, the face of our lives have became complex, and the modern life is continously moving towards more and more complexity. Therefore, young people are required to possess num...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...he internet, the face of our lives have became complex, and the modern life is contino...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he world's population is growing at a dramatically rapid pace, and this has ...
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Line 5, column 1557, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: D
...ion, I sat and I have to apply for a Ph.D program in a top U.S university, so I c...
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Line 5, column 1578, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
... to apply for a Ph.D program in a top U.S university, so I can return to my count...
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Line 5, column 1780, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oal. As you can see, in order to become a prosper person in the complex modern life, we h...
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Line 7, column 844, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...oper planning for this issue too, since their are more influenced by their emotions. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'first', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'such as', 'to sum up']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233458177278 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.129837702871 0.158761421928 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.118601747815 0.0866891130778 137% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0374531835206 0.046263068375 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0561797752809 0.0685040099705 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114856429463 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0262172284644 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88813224838 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0362047440699 0.0309702414327 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00499375780275 0.00188951952338 264% => OK
Determiners: 0.0799001248439 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.019975031211 0.0209618222197 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00624219725343 0.0139019557991 45% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4238.0 2387.08602151 178% => OK
No of words: 696.0 408.028673835 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08908045977 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.13632280105 4.48200974243 115% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362068965517 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264367816092 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193965517241 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140804597701 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88813224838 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 329.0 212.727598566 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472701149425 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 60.3896855188 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8571428571 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2012436084 48.84282405 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.357142857 120.699889404 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.392857142857 0.644075263715 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 51.2939244663 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.67597765363 1.45489161554 115% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.53562529398 0.300154397459 178% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101757113664 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0651125614717 0.0752933317313 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487128854281 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181339187111 0.151897553556 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207490521024 0.114077575197 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179312906822 0.0781384742642 229% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.48438540091 0.336927656856 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0791955017305 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.491182795961 0.210909579961 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.260027902161 0.0618886996521 420% => Less connections among paragraphs

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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