Currently the society is developing at a fast speed with fresh and complex changes showing up all the time. In order to give clear directions in complicated uncertainties, some people propose that young people, who are fresh troops constructing the future society, ought to have the ability to plan and organize. In my perspective, I am in favor of such a motion for the following reasons:
First of all, the ability to plan and organize is regarded as vital to prepare the youth for future academic and career challenges. It should be abundantly clear that this ability keeps youngsters away from worry or fear of the future that is full of obstacles and mysteries. This phenomenon can be greatly attributed to the fact that these individuals have the tendency to list of all the potential problems and think about how to solve these problems ahead. In other words, their plans provide guidance as necessary to these young people. On the contrary, youth who are lack of this ability will be more likely to overwhelmed and struggle to deal with the unwanted situations. From this view, this ability plays the significant role in young people.
Furthermore, not only is early planning and organizing experience pivotal factor in preparing for challenges ahead, it’s also beneficial to increase the probability of promotion. Since senior managers prefer to provide chance to these people who exhibit remarkable talent for making critical decisions, then these young people who have clear guidelines can easily draw leader’s attention. So these young people have the ability of plan and organize are exceedingly capable of administering a large number of employees or assistants in the future.
Besides, youth with the ability to plan and organize are more likely to be successful. That’s because such ability is found in many famous figures, especially those world-renowned business leaders. For instance, Larry Page, the former CEO of Google Co.Ltd, could be referred to as an outstanding example whose organizing ability is unparalleled. He keep Google which is a massive information industry corporation well organized.
In a nutshell, the skills such as plan and organize, which can bring in future preparation, chance of promotion and the stepping stone towards success, are supposed to be equipped with all the youth. Judging from all the above mentioned situations, we may reach the conclusion that all young individuals should be required to insist on learning how to plan and organize.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: who is a are
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Suggestion: Ltd
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, for instance, such as, first of all, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18546365915 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8282361296 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538847117794 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3989875063 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.785714286 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262944655793 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904166554061 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589843630205 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152352285956 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505288773728 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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