There is no shortage of opinion on the fact that by development of societies, as time passes, life is getting more complex. In order to have a high quality of life in modern world everyone has know to manage and organize his/her time and life. In my opinion, it would be a great idea to train children how to organize and manage their childhood from the beging years of their life. Why having the ability to plan and organize is neccessary for youth? I will explain my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, one the leading cause of complexity of today's world is high rate of development. Nowadays, every technology is beign updated in less than a month and in order to be an updated citizen one has to read a lot of books, article and news. On the other, these days, there are serious competition among youth in order to fine an appropriate job because of professionalism. So, be updated and a professional are two main factors for success. What will help young people to gain these to factors? the ability to manage their time and organizing their life. For example, as a dentist, when I was looking for a dental office to be hired, I realized that except my skills in treating patients, I also have to be able to speak both English and Spanish and also be able to work with latest technology of implant treatments which have been invented after my graduation. As a result, I had to manage my time and orginize my limited budget to learn both languages and to participate implant's workshops. My parents attitude toward teaching me how to be a good organizer from childhood helped me a lot in this situation. For this reason, I believe that youth had to be taught planning and organizing.
Secondly, time and the way of its management is so important. A Persian idiom says, time is gold which means that time is valuable like gold and should not be consumed inefficiently. A way that can help us to make the world's complexity simple is time management which is a skill that has to be learned. This ability can be achieved by teaching students how to use their free time efficiently. Drawing from my own experience, at the same time that I was studying for my entrance exam of university, I had to enroll in my English class and pass my final tests at school. These amount of studies were a burden on my shoulders and I needed manage my time wisely without wasting any of that. So, I started doing my English homework early in the morning every day before I go to school and memorize by entrance exam questions in my way home. In the end, not only I passed all my test but also, I could get a high score at my entrance exams and get admission for dentistry. After that time, managing time and carrying ou many tasks was a piece of cake for me. It clearly shows, how ability to plan and organize will help youth in their daily life.
In the light of above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that it is critical for young people to know how to plan and organize their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ty of life in modern world everyone has know to manage and organize his/her time and...
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Line 2, column 503, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... young people to gain these to factors? the ability to manage their time and organi...
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Line 2, column 779, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...sh and Spanish and also be able to work with latest technology of implant treatments which ...
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Line 2, column 961, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y limited budget to learn both languages and to participate implants workshops. M...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...tly. A way that can help us to make the worlds complexity simple is time management wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 546.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48168498168 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61021911685 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 795.6 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6100651869 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1153846154 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34615384615 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223740002612 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745552287783 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868039932381 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195464842598 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828099115401 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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