There is no shortage of opinion on the fact that nowadays both parents usually have to work full time therefore, they are only available for few hours to take care of their children. While some parents may rather spend this time to help their children with their homework, I would prefer to play games with them. What is the difference between these two ideas? I will explain my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, kids need time for both schoolwork and entertainment but there is always a substitution for parent's help in school works such as a tutor or educational videos but for leisure time, it is best to be spent with parents because by playing, emotional needs of children will be responded. Drawing from my own experience, when I was 7 years old my mother was a teacher and she never had a time to check my homeworks or help me in making hand crafts so she hired an assistant to do my stuffs. I remember that although my mother was so busy, she insisted on finding some time each afternoon to play sports with me and my siblings in order to support us emotionally and psychologically. For this reason, I prefer to have fun time with my children.
Secondly, scientists believe that societies suffer from depression and stress these days. They explain that one of the efficient ways to reduce the stress is to spend time with our beloved ones, specifically doing physical activities such as sport games together. These kind of activities are useful for both parents and children because it decreases their anxiety and enhances the quality of life. For example, A recent study which has been conducted in 2015 revealed that children who usually play sports with their parents at weekends have lower rate of depressions in contrast to those who just stay home all day. This example clearly shows the importance of playing games with children.
In the light of above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that parents have to find some more time in their daily life to play with their kids because not only it strengthens children's emotions but also it is beneficial for their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...adays both parents usually have to work full time therefore, they are only available for ...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ctivities such as sport games together. These kind of activities are useful for both paren...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in contrast, kind of, such as, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77808219178 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62978878974 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556164383562 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8123161856 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.571428571 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364386634158 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124097879377 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779810209447 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233335573902 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143315506151 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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