People have always been tried to be more satisfied in their life, but in many times they were not successful. Their satisfaction is dependent on many factors such as health, money, family etc. These factors are changing during time. Consequently, their satisfaction is changing in years. Researchers and psychologists did many researches during last few years to find out about differences in modern people and old people during the time. Obviously, there is still a little doubt about the result, but many of them believe that modern people are less happy compare with old people.
First and foremost reason is about competition. As a matter of fact, the population of humans was smaller in the past and the competition was smaller as well. People did not need to cheat or work hard to be successful in past, but today many people especially in poor areas such as middle east, cheat a lot in anything to survive in a harsh atmosphere. For example, I used to live in Iran and this country is not a rich one. People in that country had many difficulties in their lives. Obviously, there were many cheats and competitions everywhere. Some companies were trying to copy a name and a shape of a successful product to survive in that harsh market. Obviously, living in this situation is not pleasant for any body and people can not live happy in that situation.
Second of all, people used to spend their free times together. In the past, there were not that much new introduced technologies. People were not busy with video games, computers and other electronic devices. In fact, they were together in afternoon after their work and it had a positive influence on their mental health. Psychologically, spending time with family is an effective factor for some people who has some depression to be out of it.
Last but not least, people's environment was calmer before. They used to live in some small cities with some simple rules. They did not have to spent many times to read about every thing's structure. Everything was simple in the past, but those things are really sophisticated today. Indeed people are under a high pressure by modern life style in big cities. They have to know about many things to be e mediocre citizen. For instance, when I came to United States two years ago, I started to learn the culture as fast as possible and I was googling everything in the first couple o months. After a while, I thought that I can be independence in many areas, but I was wrong, because there were many things left. Rules and details are not finish able. I am still dependent on google every single day. This kind of complicated life is not easy for any body. People have to keep learning in their life and they cannot be free.
To sum up, having a modern life style is not easy for many people and they have to learn a lot and be active in their life to survive in a harsh environment. Finally, there is no guarantee for them to be satisfied at the end.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...he past and the competition was smaller as well. People did not need to cheat or w...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... to cheat or work hard to be successful in past, but today many people especially in po...
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Line 3, column 717, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anybody'?
Suggestion: anybody
...g in this situation is not pleasant for any body and people can not live happy in that s...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
... things are really sophisticated today. Indeed people are under a high pressure by mod...
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Line 7, column 845, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anybody'?
Suggestion: anybody
...ind of complicated life is not easy for any body. People have to keep learning in their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, really, second, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 15.1003584229 245% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2441.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 525.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64952380952 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56786348985 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 778.5 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2358365829 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9696969697 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93939393939 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276233832777 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697846958572 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546640846399 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164171425409 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06311366047 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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