Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that the rate of changes in technology, science and society is higher than which people afforded to be adapted to it. This condition increases unsatisfying and lack of happiness in the societies. Contrary to this popular belief there are still those who argue that this dramatic changes in all aspects of human lives have made the world a better place for life, and presence of problems are an inevitable part of progress. However, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy with their lives than people were in the past.
First and foremost, today people just work so hard to be adopted we these quick changes. They always are thinking about raising their income to be able to move along with transformation. For instance, buying a new cell phone, a new version of a laptop and more optional car. Most people are neglecting to healthy nutrition, sport and social relationship, because they are so busy. This condition creates stress and anxiety.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that high-speed transformation of our world leads to paling of moral beliefs among individuals. People lying very easily to obtain more benefits. The co-workers are not honest together and sometimes do some unethical behavior in order to surpass their opponent. Continuing this condition not only would not be brought development, but also it will put the future of our world in the huge risks.
Finally, yet importantly, the rapidly changing society make family members unwilling to spend the time to one other. The traditional plane of families are going to disappear and it is rare that all member of the family come together and having dinner on one table. This has a negative effect on children minds. As a result, the census shows that in recent years the percentage of criminal behavior among teenage children increased remarkably.
On the basis of reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that because the world is changing so rapidly, people are less happy than they were in the past. Because being forgotten the main aim of life and being pale the moral beliefs and reduce in families relationships.
- In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 90
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 75
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- TPO 49 3
- In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
...be adopted we these quick changes. They always are thinking about raising their income to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, still, for instance, as a result, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99468085106 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65134364665 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582446808511 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3062789279 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8421052632 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394418266077 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102498469368 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178762822374 0.0737576698707 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204460866021 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165454256947 0.0645574589148 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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