Happiness is very crucial in our lives. If you are happy, you feel so good and comfortable in your life. Some people think that because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past, others disagree. In my view, people are happier nowadays for two important reasons.
first, there are so many funny programs today. you can easily laugh by contributing or watching these programs such as funny theatre and entertainment show on television. For example, I remember that my wife and I went to a theatre two weeks ago and watch a funny show there. The show name was Superstar and in that show, a man tried to attract the woman's attention and introduce himself as a famous superstar. He tried so many fun ways which you could not stop laughing about those. From this, I believe that today people are happier than before.
Second, I ensure that the quality of life has been improved last decads. With providing standards and laws, governments prepare conditions that people have a better quality of life. Nowadays people easily find proper foods and other needs and they have fewer problems rather than before. So I think that they have happier lives rather than in the past. For Instance, I remember that when I was a child, we had to wait 2 or 3 hours to bye the oil in order to turn in the fireplace and warming our home. But today we just use the fireplace which works by gas. I think it has improved our lives and make us happier than before. This experience taught me that improvement in lifestyle help people to be happy.
Moreover, I agree that people must work harder and more than before, But you can not deny the relief that they gain for their work. It is true that the world is so complicated now and I believe that it has some disadvantage, But I consider these conditions as an opportunity.
In sum, I think that people are happier now. Not only there are so many funny programs today, but also the quality of life has been improved last decads. All of us must try to build a comfortable world for futures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: First
... nowadays for two important reasons. first, there are so many funny programs today...
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Suggestion: You
...there are so many funny programs today. you can easily laugh by contributing or wat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54210526316 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39132203031 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510526315789 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.966852776 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0434782609 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5217391304 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370675465524 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956503460501 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172254269234 0.0737576698707 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221196425729 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204750428174 0.0645574589148 317% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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