The world is changing in every second due to the rapid rate of inventions. Nowadays, these progresses become debatable for many scientists. Some of them believe that these phenomena have harmful effects. However, personally, I am of the opinion that in the new world we are now experiencing, there are more ways to enjoy your life than before. I feel this way because of the following reasons that I am going to explain.
First of all, I think that the world is changing for good to make our lives much easier, and because of that we can enjoy sharing events with friends. Everyday, we hear that a new gadget is introduced that its job is to do things which were not possible in the past. The internet, for example, leads a revolution in our society. It helps people to connect in every moment they want through a phone or a computer. My own experience is an excellent example of this. I remember the time that my sister was a student in a distant city. My mother always had a sad feeling of her absence. After a few months, I found a way to help them to talk together face to face. I used the internet video call to bring moments to see each other. It was one of the best moments of my life to see my mother happiness. If the internet did not provide us this opportunity, my mother would have suffered my sister absence.
Second, it is obvious the new appliances we are using in our daily lives was not available in a few years ago. This proves us a much more convenience and satisfaction because these devices bring us comfortable methods to cook. Some people love cooking, but suppose that you have not any dish washer and you have to wash all the dishes by yourself. This frustrates you and maybe causes to hate of cooking. However, with help of these appliances we can enjoy cooking without frustrations. For example, when I was a child, I remember after a regular lunch in my grandmother’s house a mountain of dirty dishes had to be washed. It is one of the things I hate, and happy for having a dish washer.
In conclusion, I think that the world we are living today provides us more tools than before to be happy. This is because of the reasons that I have explored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[2]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... can enjoy sharing events with friends. Everyday, we hear that a new gadget is introduce...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39130434783 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49184766146 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5687388505 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.3333333333 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133883617165 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348011596542 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433145423528 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947956937195 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119728382658 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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