The world is changing in every second due to the rapid rate of inventions. Nowadays, these progresses become debatable for many scientists. Some of them believe that these phenomena have harmful effects. However, personally, I am of the opinion that in the new world we are now experiencing, there are more ways to enjoy your life than before. I feel this way because of the following reasons that I am going to explain.
First of all, I think that the world is changing for good to make our lives much easier, and because of that we can enjoy sharing events with friends. Everyday, we hear that a new gadget is introduced that its job is to do things which were not possible in the past. The internet, for example, leads a revolution in our society. It helps people to connect in every moment they want through a phone or a computer. My own experience is an excellent example of this. I remember the time that my sister was a student in a distant city. My mother always had a sad feeling of her absence. After a few months, I found a way to help them to talk together face to face. I used the internet video call to bring moments to see each other. It was one of the best moments of my life to see my mother happiness. If the internet did not provide us this opportunity, my mother would have suffered my sister absence.
Second, it is obvious the new appliances we are using in our daily lives was not available in a few years ago. This proves us a much more convenience and satisfaction because these devices bring us comfortable methods to cook. Some people love cooking, but suppose that you have not any dish washer and you have to wash all the dishes by yourself. This frustrates you and maybe causes to hate of cooking. However, with help of these appliances we can enjoy cooking without frustrations. For example, when I was a child, I remember after a regular lunch in my grandmother’s house a mountain of dirty dishes had to be washed. It is one of the things I hate, and happy for having a dish washer.
In conclusion, I think that the world we are living today provides us more tools than before to be happy. This is because of the reasons that I have explored.
- Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past 70
- Nowadays many high schools and universities require students to work on projects in groups and all members of the group receive the same grade mark on the project Do you agree or disagree that giving every member of a group the same grade is a good way to 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to read or watch the news presented by people whose views are similar to your own than by people whose views are different from yours 40
- Nowadays many high schools and universities require students to work on projects in groups and all members of the group receive the same grade mark on the project Do you agree or disagree that giving every member of a group the same grade is a good way to 70
- Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[2]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... can enjoy sharing events with friends. Everyday, we hear that a new gadget is introduce...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43532338308 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56608890281 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514925373134 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4380434132 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.32 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.08 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1305539285 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322122210523 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381243346845 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866225708096 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175474059736 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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