Is being patient more important in life ?
Honesty, patience and generosity go hand in hand with each other. In order to make him/her a good person, it is important to teach all these three virtues to a young child. Out of all the characteristics, I believe being patient is the most important thing that is required in life. I think this way for three reasons which I will examine in this essay.
First of all, there are going to be a lot of challenges in future and it is important not to give up when one is so close to their goals. Things like academics, careers, business are constantly rife with difficulties that slows down a person and it is essential that the person keeps on moving. For example, some tough exams like IAS in India has a lot of competition, selection rounds and requires a lot of hard work to crack it. Most students try again and again as there are upto six attempts allowed to appear in this exam. It is easy to feel like giving up if one does not make through even after two attempts. In this situation, patience plays a major role through out the journey. Those who manage to qualify this exam are usually patient in nature. Hence, it is important for the parents to teach their youngsters to remain patient at evry point of life.
Secondly, long-term goals in life demands a person to be patient. One should constantly be prudent enough to go through necessary steps require to fulfill the goals and not to rush over things or end up making rash decisions. For example, my friend gave me the idea of investing money in mutual funds saying it will help me after few years. But as soon as I saw dip in the market value of the shares, I drew all my money back. But the same friend of mine was patient and waited for few more years until the narket value boomed one day. If that small dip had not had made me lose patience, then I could have been rich like him at a vey young age. Hence, it is important for adults to make sure that young children maintains their cool and sagacity while taking important decisions.
Finally, a good leader may not be honest or helpful, but he is always patient. One cannot lead a team or company if he gives in to his anger and loses his cool frequently. For example, there is a team whose leader gives his opinions and ideas after listening to each and everyone present in the team. And there is the other team whose lead hardly listens to anyone else or dismisses rest of the others once he likes a particular approach. Whose team is gonna be more successful or efficient?
Obviously the first one, as the leader is making sure that the very defination of team holds to be true no matter what. While the other team will gradually be filled with obsequious members making sure that they don't anger the boss. Hence, patience is a important characteristic to be learned by young people in order to be a good leader.
Essentially, there are few people who become successful in all spheres of life. As mentioned, patience is the key factor in their attributes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fulfilling
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2442.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 547.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46435100548 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4187639277 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502742230347 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7145117786 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2068965517 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8620689655 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65517241379 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304429796705 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794302979188 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103089127258 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149420579168 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528676352203 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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