The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide
Traveling in all of the worlds is considered as one of the most influential and exciting entertainments. A well organized and interesting journey could stimulate the traveler sense of curasity. Each human being travel to change the atmosphere and relax. It is very important to plan the trip in order to gain maximum benefits of the trip and enjoy a lot. One of the option that could provide such a good plan for travel is using tour. In my own perspective, travel in a group led by a tour guide is a very appropriate option. Following reasons and examples will elaborate on my opinion.
First of all, certainly, each new place for a traveler has a lot of places to visit. Some of these place are very special and worth seeing them at least once in entire life. There is a fact that the travel time is limited, therefore someone should use the knowledge and experience a trustable tour guide to ensure that all of the exciting and intersting places will be visited during the journey. for example, I have a travel to a historical city with a lot of exciting and remarkable places, but I dont know where are day exactly and I just have three days to stay. A tour guide realy helped me and I visit very intersting places. Further more, the people in a new places may speak in a different language and even have special ritual and culture, so a tour guide could help passengers to communicate with local people and help them recgonize their ritual and culture. For instance, if you have a journey to China, presence of a tour guide would be very helpful in communicating with different people and knowing their vast culture and ritual.
Second, The travel in a group provides this opportunity to meet different people in the group. On the long journey, you can talk to them which prevent the feel of boring. And also maybe you can find new friends become fellow traveler for your next trip. I will describe this with an example. My friend had a long trip by bus within a group. He met with new people and also find a friend who had a great conversation with him and my friend benefit a lot with that person's experience and they become really good friend and now always they travel together.
To summarize the aforementioned points and examples. I believe one of the best ways to travel is traveling in a group led by a tour guide. Because, a tour guide could show and indicate all of the valuable and notable places to visit, further it can help in having a conversation with local people who had different languages. And also, you can meet new people while you have trip in a group.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: For
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
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... you can meet new people while you have trip in a group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54700854701 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55660942167 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472222222222 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7104241498 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324982863581 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10139378722 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141620197003 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219405130687 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10108182727 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.