The best way to travel is in a group, led by a tour guide. Do you agree or disagree?
The best way to travel is in a group, led by a tour guide. Do you agree or disagree?
Travel is an essential part of the holidays in the western part of the world. Some people choose to travel with travel agencies, while others prefer to schedule the travel by themselves. This essay will discuss why is it in fact better to travel without the traveling agency and plan every step on your own.
Firstly, traveling with an agency means travelling in bigger group of unknown people, with unknown habits and preferences. The tour guide is a person who has to take a lot of different needs into account when planning the travel. That means for instance that some people will walk faster, some will walk slower and it can be hard to find a middle ground. On the other hand, traveling without the guide means not only avoiding all the aforementioned difficulties, but it also brings more freedom into planning each and every day.
Travelling with an agency oftentimes mean having a tour guide. He or she is the person you will be seeing every day of your holiday for the whole time. But what if this person doesn’t fit you, what if their personality is annoying you? There is no way of escaping this situation because it is already paid for. By planning activity on your own it is easier to avoid this type of situation. You are surrounded only by the people whose personality you already approve of, which means there are no unnecessary surprises.
Thirdly, traveling with an agency is oftentimes more expensive than traveling on your own. The accomodation and the schedule is given to you, even though some places or hostels that are offered might not be the person’s choice if planning on its own, because of the price. Furthermore the agency is obliged to charge more, because it has to cover for the tour guide and all the travel preparation expenses. However travelling on your own can spare you all of those and it can in fact be an interesting journey of discovering something new and unknown by yourself before the actual travel.
To sum it up, in this essay the disadvantages of traveling with a travel agency are listed, as well as advantages of traveling by yourself.Based on the arguments explored above I am of the opinion that it is better to travel without the tour agency, because of its price, the possibility of a bad leader and the annoyance of waiting for others and having to adjust to so many different needs. Meaning that planning by myself would be the best choice for me, because of its endless possibilities, more freedom and less stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, for instance, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71523178808 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64004001212 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46357615894 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5306409564 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90476190476 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315644087731 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121581107135 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157598774722 0.0737576698707 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273320160021 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.325325200419 0.0645574589148 504% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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