Do you agree or disagree? One can learn a lot about another people from the books and movies that he likes.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of doing various activities which have a great impact on people's lifestyle. Many people deem that people can easily influenced by everything, especially from activities they do, while others have a conviction that judging individuals from their interests is not real. it is my firm belief that we can not learn about human's personality from his preferences and I think that way for a number of reasons , and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, nobody could overlook this fact that human's character is not stable, it can changes easily. As we all know, we can find out about person's character if we stay together for a long period of time. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. about three years ago, I went to journey with my classmate. we stay together for three days , and by this time, I understood that she is that kind of person who can not control herself , too irresponsible one. For this reason, I can surely say that while traveling, people show themselves who they really are. By and large, we can learn about person when we are staying together , but not by the books or movies.
Another equally vital reason that should be highlighted here is people's preference. Usually, people prefer the things which are opposite to their personality. they want to try something different , and choose different things. Drawing from my own experience, I strongly believe that human beings get tired of being monotonous. my brother likes to watch disastrous films, and satisfied with it , however when it comes to real life he is calm man , a bit scared. To put in a nutshell, activities do not show person's character.
Last but not least; human beings do different kinds of activities when they want to relax. For instance, when I want to get out of stress I prefer to read comics, which is really helps me to relax. however, I am a serious individual who can not even joking. In brief interests does not show human's features at all.
In light of all aforementioned reasons, it is explicitly obvious that people can not judged by activities which they prefer to do. preference that could be opposite to character of person let me think that we can not learn about people by books or movies .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, while, for instance, i think, in brief, kind of, by and large, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75912408759 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64683291993 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2070263107 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6818181818 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239420400066 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696745129984 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605796461159 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146121856974 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07962311358 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.