Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that travel as a part of a group would be more reasonable than travelling alone. Most of the experienced global tourists purpose that travelling with a group that led by a tour leader is better for people than travelling alone. Contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that travelling with a tour is boring and is limited people freedom. However, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
First and foremost, travel by group would be safer than travelling alone. In a trip maybe happen some unexpecting events, such as illness, crash or missing way. For example, last year one of my friends and I going to the Kavir desert in Iran. Both of us were the experienced person on nature trips. Nonetheless, we miss the true path in the desert. These kinds of happens in deserts areas can be so dangerous, because of threatening of body dehydration and sandstorms. However, we were very lucky that the emergency services agency found us.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that journey as part of a group would be more fun. Travelling with a group is a good opportunity for making new friendships and spending happy times. For instance, you can have lunch with other people and discuss with them and have some humerus times. In addition, during this trips, you can find some new partners for future travels. For example, last year during one of my nature trips I found two partners for mountain climbing trip in summer to Damavand, Iran.
Finally, yet importantly, people can learn a lot of valuable knowledge from tour guides. All tour leaders passed a lot of training courses and they have a lot of experience in this field. For example, some of the travelling agencies not only taking people to different amazing trips, but also along these trips they holding several training classes for people who are interested in learning techniques, such as map reading and using GPS.
On the basis of reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Because it is safer, happier and more interesting and also it would be an opportunity to learn useful information and make new friends.
- TPO 46 81
- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities 83
- Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...xample, last year one of my friends and I going to the Kavir desert in Iran. Both...
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'services'' or 'service's'?
Suggestion: services'; service's
..., we were very lucky that the emergency services agency found us. Another significan...
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Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...some humerus times. In addition, during this trips, you can find some new partners f...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... experience in this field. For example, some of the travelling agencies not only taking peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73383084577 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57879106604 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509950248756 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9192002901 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.619047619 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271876957562 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878547058216 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127920147254 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164201898876 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124883744582 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.