Broccoli
Broccoli is a vegetable that is popular throughout the United States, but it can be grown only in temperate climates with mild summers. Because of this limitation, 90 percent of the broccoli consumed in the United States is grown in the cooler regions of California, on the West Coast. It must be shipped 4:000 kilometers across the entire country to reach the populous East Coast
For 3 main reasons this is better to grow Broccoli locally:
Frist is the Price of transportation, When importing Brroceli from other countries its price has consisted of transportation cost plus other costs, So it affects on the total price.It is cheaper for the local costumer to serve this vegetable on their counters.
The second reason is a type of broccoli. The new broccoli is being created using traditional breeding techniques: researchers are crossbreeding broccoli with other similar plants that have desirable characteristics. Genetically modified crops are very controversial and it cause customers to feel they are unsafe and reject the product.
The third reason is health,It is imported to use the vegetables freshly. When grown Broccoli locally it can be eaten much sooner after it is cut,So their beneficial nutrients and vitamins are still reminded of them and, Also it helps to save time and prevent of wasting time.
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| 2020-10-09 | Maziyeh Khavari1390 | 3 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15348837209 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88870536968 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.467364232 48.9658058833 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.5 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316389529576 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163660731449 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13115610207 0.0737576698707 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187323946304 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122048403678 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.