Cars come in all different shapes and sizes. Some prefer a large one, while a compact one. What are advantages and disadvantages of each type and which would you prefer?
One of the conspicuous trends of today world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that different shapes and sizes. Some people can purchase a large one and other people can purchase a compact one.
There is a widespread worry that this will lead to myriad concerns in one's life. However I do not entirely accept this and I will explain this essay in my view point. There are number of arguments in favour of my stance. Most preponderant one is than buy a small cars are less heavy than large ones. their engine needs to produce lesser amount of mechanical pull. Their fuel usage is moderate comparing than to heavy vehicles can only contribute to the expenses of filling up a gas tank Lower need for fuel in small cars leads to lower expenditure. Then the amount of money is always saves up in this way can be spend but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to a wide range of advantages it offers not only one benefits more which it comes to being effective more enhance the productivity of quality of their lives much ease efficiency and convenience. Needless to say all these merits stand one is good stead as far as augmenting of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Hence it is a apparent that why many favour of small car is very convenient because it takes less space. And also parking a large car in a fulled packed in the parking areas.
In the views of arguments mentioned about one can conclude that the benefits to the needs of all the customers. Thus I prefer having a small car are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun favour seems to be countable; consider using: 'many favours'.
Suggestion: many favours
...d. Hence it is a apparent that why many favour of small car is very convenient because...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...fits to the needs of all the customers. Thus I prefer having a small car are indeed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56842105263 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46750254111 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2513116167 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242739912795 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704076955825 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588378523444 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142419993056 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595075322447 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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