Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio, and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. What is your opinion?
One of the conspicuous trends of today world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that the mass media is an important as food water and air. Mass media keeps every body updated about the world. We are aware of the local and international affairs. Also it keeps us entrained.
There is a widespread worry that this will lead to myriad concerns in one's life. However I do not entirely accept this and I will explain this essay in my view point. There is a number of arguments in favour of my stance. Most preponderant one is that mass media or electronic media is beyond that, e-mails, blogs, social networking, apps, newsletters every thing has becomes part of our lives that can only contribute to. However it has negative influences also on us. Thanks to a wide range of advantages it offers not only one benefits more which it comes to being effective more enhance the productivity of quality of their lives much ease efficiency and convenience. Needless to say all these merits stand one is good stead as far as augmenting of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Children are so much exposed to the internet these days that unknowingly that becoming victims of cyber crime, bullying and child sex. Reports say that too much use of internet has caused to a depression.
In the views of arguments mentioned about one can conclude that the benefits of our lives, but we need to make sure that we are protected from this we especially the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72480620155 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64516071115 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0276587816 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0714285714 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109371513401 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300688933117 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497779666023 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589960266366 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231179124354 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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