Nowadays, public communication means such as television, radio and newspaper play a significant role in individuals’ life. These tools can provide a lot of information and entertainment to every citizen. In my opinion, mass media become an integral part of every citizen’s life.
To begin with, the main use of mass media is to spread information quickly. Television is the most popular instrument of mass media and provides entertainment and daily news updates to people. Television channels such as National Geography, Discovery, News channels provide great knowledge to the people. Television is often used by agencies and media houses to convince their audience through advertisements, discussions, news or shows. According to the Indian Mass Media Committee survey, in India 81% of families have television.
Moreover, radio and newspapers are the cheapest means of mass media. Radio and newspapers are important tools in any emergencies like Curfew or natural calamities to providing information quickly to the public. Another is a newspaper which could offer the latest information, facts and figures, and daily update on weather, politics, economics and several more from daily morning.
In conclusion, the vital importance of mass media and other similar means are inevitable. It is irrefutable that it becomes a daily routine of individuals’ life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65384615385 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26582118582 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600961538462 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8007187872 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4615384615 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236190380264 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888872374119 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721079757389 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138211886284 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316056894033 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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