Mass media refer to the diversified communication technology via radio, television, film, newspaper, mail, social sites etc. these are the major source of information. I completely agree with the statement that nowadays, “the mass media have become the essential parts of our lives” because these are the sites we get information through. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both pros and cons sides then conclude my opinion.
Firstly, the invention of media changes the discourage of public due to which it is believed that Media have played a pivotal role in the changes of the world. Before the invention of these sources people were devoted of different information, news, and most importantly the through of dexterous person like politician, social worker, influencing people, etc. but nowadays people can not only listen to other but also express their opinion, belief, etc. Because of media, it has become easy to acquire knowledge anywhere at any time.
Secondly, mass media has some negative impact on our society too. Because of propaganda, and other unusual information like the world is going to destroy, etc. society feel insecure or fall into fear. Apart from this people waste a lot of time on social media, TV, radio, etc. due to which it affects the people life as well as society too. Aired of unusual program or crime show increase social evils, etc.
In conclusion, mass media has both the advantages and disadvantages. So it depends on people how they use it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05976095618 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64861444713 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5775271925 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.375 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222995774971 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623097247574 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719690084312 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125689032328 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619295862599 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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