Motivation refer to the encouragement which keen you to do something. I’m totally agree with the statement “motivation and practice is better than training” because without motivation you will feel bored to do whereas without practice better will not come from you. But I also believe, training it is the first step of learning, without learning you do practice.
In one hand, motivation motivate you to practice and find your best. Even in class room lecturer need to motivate their student because training is one time but motivation is for all time. Most importantly rather than motivated by other it’s necessary to motivate yourself because self-motivation help you to find your own weakness and rectify it. For example; Stev Jobs, Sachin Tendulker are such person who face many problem and failure in life but they didn’t give-up and bounce back with even more powerfully.
However, the good environment and guidance is most important is most necessary because some time it’s very difficult to criticize yourself. So a positive through and training teach you positive skill. For example; Steven job was full body paralyses but with his positive ego make him alive and continue innovation.
Thus, motivation and practice is very essential stuff to encourage yourself but a proper training is also necessary to learn because everyone can’t be genius.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 302, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help you find' instead.
Suggestion: help you find
...tivate yourself because self-motivation help you to find your own weakness and rectify it. For e...
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Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...chin Tendulker are such person who face many problem and failure in life but they didn'...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36529680365 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86876484258 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625570776256 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8362718802 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.818181818 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232676760614 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920460570325 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685626087025 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136575704515 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447097258042 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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