Law refers to the rules made by the government or community in a society to follow the certain system. I also believe that law changes the behavior of people. In this essay, I will discuss to support my opinion.
Firstly, the law is made to adhere to the rules by the people because it maintains discipline in society as well as in their life too. For example; traffic rules are made to reduce the accident if any rules are broken by the people they will be a penalty for their mistake and so is happen in other cases like crime or murder, theft, etc…
However, I also believe that some time strict rules which are forced to follow to the people may concrete negative result. For example; punishment given to criminal or an innocent person will try to take revenge after completing the sentence with their enemy. Which is not good. So think these people should send to habitation center or cases should be analyzed properly.
In conclusion, after analyzing both sides I think without law people will behave animal or do whatever they want where with law people will live in the certain system which is good for the nation and this maintain peace in a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mpleting the sentence with their enemy. Which is not good. So think these people shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63942307692 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28595026238 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572115384615 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.0457208733 50.4703680194 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.222222222 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222134313823 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914716171723 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100440238682 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135526826142 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469948210428 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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