In the age of technology, the aging of the population is increasing rapidly with the help of medicine and with the boon of technology. This has become a highly debated topic in society or in an individual because they have their own opinion related to the content. I personally believe that everything has their own pros and cons. In this essay, I'll discuss both the aspect and conclude my view.
Firstly, the increasing of the aging population is beneficial for a society or any group sector because they are the most experienced and well-known people of the society which is a good learning source for the young star. Apart from this, Industry, University or any education sector or governing sector, they are most experienced and can easily lead and help their subordinate which is much beneficial. For example; TATA group industry of India has only aged staff in top-level and they are the strength of the company due to the company never fail, they believe.
In other hand, people mean the retired people of their job by the government. So, for these type of people government have to make new budge or provide facility like old-pension, etc... But it also needs to consider that these people are well known about the history and are accountable for the upcoming generation. They can tech or experience to their upbringing population about culture and tradition.
Thus, in conclusion, I think there are no rights to say that who should be alive or should age people enjoy life with the help of medical care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28731343284 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95061028005 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.770667979 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 141.7 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224486651415 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083846841373 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327207859795 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123984055819 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041207005527 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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