There are many sports which entertain us such as football, cricket, hockey, sky lifting, surfing etc… which are played under high protection, security and own their own risk. However, some people believe that this types of games have many advantages wherein another side some people oppose it. In this essay, I will discuss both sides to conclude.
Here, as I mention above that sports events are organized for the entertainment and the game like rafting, sky lifting, BMX, football, boxing, etc… are the crucial sports of entertainment which fascinate huge audience attention. Apart from this, league of these games helps a player to earn a huge amount. So I also believe that every game is essential because every person has their own stamina and skills of playing different games.
In other hands, some people believe that the adventure game has huge cons than then pros because they might be thinking that adventure sports are not for entertainment. The reason is people or especially the children want to practice the same which is very risky without security. However, I believe that there are many technologies available for the player to avoid risk and if the children will be guided properly and taught then these kinds of offense will come down.
To recapitulate, I think no games have any pros and cons It depends on their experience and technique alone with under high defensive kits for protection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...e believe that this types of games have many advantage where in other side some people oppose ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, apart from, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08620689655 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46863499521 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599137931034 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6948740205 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118994479325 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047544214096 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343965580782 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753763417359 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146321584279 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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