Childhood is the happiest phase in the life.
This statement is asking the view about whether childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. Although it seems the generalized truth for each and every person's life but scrunitizing the statement it heads towards the philosophy of one's life. I would give reasoning for my stand as follows:
Firstly, happy time should be defined so that it would help us to infer about the happiest time in the life. One is feeling happiness when one is fulfilling all the expectations and achieving the desired target whether by oneself or another. This kind of situation is almost impossible to be achieved until and unless there is no expectation on the one. This is the kind of situation from which any child is going through. Thus, childhood is said to be happiest phase of any person's life.
Secondly, the biggest hurdle for any person to gain happiness is tendency to compete with others to gain more assests in terms of recognition, rewards or money. Tendency of any person for the competition makes them more jealous and greedy. Although it gives them internal motivation to achieve something bigger, it gives less satisfaction for the same. One would counterargue that this kind of tendency is seen in any children. But this tendency is ephemeral during childhood. Thus, children seem to enjoy the competition where adults seem to take it as a challenge. This is the difference in childhood and grown-up phase which makes childhood happier.
Now, there are also some examples who are happier than their childhood. We can call them austere, hermetic or monk. But they are the one who never competes with others. They are the ones who are free from all the facilities. They are the one who never hope for something excitedly but finds inner peace and happiness by just living a simple life. They should be idol for the normal person. It may not be possible to be one due to emotional attachment to others but one should gain happiness by to be like one. So that one can gain happiness as much as childhood phase or even more.
In the conclusion, it can be said that although the childhood phase is the happiest one due to no expectation, less competition, less hopes but one can gain happiness by letting go the feelings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ment it heads towards the philosophy of ones life. I would give reasoning for my sta...
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...ing through. Thus, childhood is said to be happiest phase of any persons life. Secondly,...
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...or money. Tendency of any person for the competition makes them more jealous and ...
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...happiness by just living a simple life. They should be idol for the normal person. I...
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...xpectation, less competition, less hopes but one can gain happiness by letting go...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220902612827 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.166270783848 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0665083135392 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0380047505938 0.046263068375 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498812351544 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118764845606 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0308788598575 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62068625674 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332541567696 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106888361045 0.0887237588012 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0261282660333 0.0209618222197 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0190023752969 0.0139019557991 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2237.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 386.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79533678756 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29274611399 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246113989637 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189119170984 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124352331606 0.112833075102 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62068625674 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466321243523 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.4155639585 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7826086957 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0816112308 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2608695652 120.699889404 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7826086957 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.478260869565 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.3940076594 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.45794392523 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490832596204 0.300154397459 164% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152721477661 0.103427244359 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107726850772 0.0752933317313 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474398404423 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176418779657 0.151897553556 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178046691667 0.114077575197 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129064147317 0.0781384742642 165% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360162651386 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0616954418999 0.067059652881 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361718527375 0.210909579961 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111280640363 0.0618886996521 180% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.