Voting is the right of every citizen of the country. Voting for the right candidate, who will help the nation grow and do the best for the citizens, is the duty of every citizen. Some people believe that children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote. others disagree. In my opinion, this children should not be allowed to vote.
First, many children are smart but not that mature to vote. All children are not enough mature that they can make this important decision on their own. They may like some candidate just because of his looks, personality, style etc. for example when I asked my younger cousin, who is sixteen years old, that whom would he vote and why for the US elections. he said that he would vote for Donald Trump just because he is better looking and charming than all other candidates. An undeserving candid might get elected if the children are allowed to vote and that is not in the best interest of the nation.
Secondly, children might get deceived by the lucrative offers and the advertisements of candidates. Some child can get ready to vote for a candidate just for an offer of chocolates, ice-creams or whatever the child likes. For example, when I was a child, I used to say that I will vote for the person who will give me free chocolates forever. At that time, I could not understand the gravity of the matter that how important one vote can be At that time, I was ready to vote for anyone who would fulfill my personal interest. Each and every vote decide the future of the nation. when politicians make fake promises these innocent children might get deceived and vote for the wrong person.
In sum, there can be some exceptional cases, but the majority of children are not mature and experienced enough to make a wise decision of whom to vote; So, children should not be allowed to vote.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5696969697 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40470154732 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478787878788 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1097117046 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7058823529 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385462970742 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14670189475 0.076458572812 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190158876558 0.0737576698707 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29440819384 0.150856017488 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161314918536 0.0645574589148 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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