Children should only play sports for fun not in competitions or contest. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In our modern societies, doing sport seems to be a basic requirement for children. The issue that children should do sport for fun or competition has long been marked by controversy among people. While many parents and families claim that children should not get involved in any competition, I am firmly convinced that participating children in sports contest can be advantageous for both children and the society.
To begin with, participating in a sports competition with a defined goal can encourage children to put all their effort on that. For example, when we define a gift as a goal for a sports competition, children would not make fun of the contest and consequently, we cultivate youngsters' mind to overcome to that game. In addition, in a sports contest children have the opportunity to learn teamwork to attain a goal which in turn results in having more socialized young people. As it clearly reveals, taking part in a sports contest is more beneficial for school children.
Moreover, with stage a sports competition among children, they could be ranked in that sport. Therefore, sport talented could be recognized and they could be cultivated for professional sport. Statistics reveal that most of the sports stars were recognized by school sports contest. Since this firmly shows, sports competition have the benefit of identifying the possible sport talented at an early age.
As a conclusion, I would like to reaffirm that, participating in a sport for competition rather than for fun is advantageous as it can encourage youngsters for doing professional sport and also can bring about sports talent identification.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
..., when we define a gift as a goal for a sports competition, children would not make fu...
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Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind overcoming'.
Suggestion: mind overcoming
...d consequently, we cultivate youngsters mind to overcome to that game. In addition, in a sports ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ool children. Moreover, with stage a sports competition among children, they could ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21132075472 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04306341686 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.172638088 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365745914481 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167148572269 0.076458572812 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639385603888 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253604444378 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583464822858 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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