In some countries, the number of shootings increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent years, numerous developed nations have witnessed a dramatic increase in gun shooting in crime scenes. Likewise, who believe that the reason behind this fact is the public armed, I am firmly convinced that it occurs as a result of an increase in crime rate and lack of having strict laws against having a gun.
To begin with, the fact that ordinary people have the right to hold a gun at home has given rise to the crime rate. Statistics from the recent couple of decades clearly reveal that crime rate particularly armed crime has had a major increase after that citizen has changed their idea to protect themselves using guns. This clearly shows that, in many countries, using guns by the public results in a growth in the number of shooting and crimes.
Moreover, in many developed countries, there is no strict legislation against carrying a gun which can lead to experimenting more shooting even in civil arguments. According to police reports, the number of using guns in non-serious arguments is on the increase. It can be the direct consequence of lack of having strict laws to ban holding guns by ordinary people. As a result, the government seems could act as a deterrent by legislating some restrictive laws which deteriorate having the gun.
As a conclusion, I would like to reaffirm that the increasing number of shooting in crime scene has roots in the fact that ordinary people hold guns at their home and also lack of having any laws to ban having a gun for the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, moreover, so, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58867201941 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513409961686 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0495385427 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.7 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248779732031 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110326019332 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539748183566 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1691241206 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029961616129 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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