In some countries, the number of shootings increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The reason for increase in shooting cases in many countries has been linked to the number of households owning a gun. More and more people now own a gun and that has led to increase in number of cases reported for murders in some countires. this essay will argue why it is completely right to think that number of guns give rise to number of killings.
I understand why some people think that more number of guns have nothing to do with increased killings. people give the argument that it is not that guns kill, it is the person behind the gun, who is responsible for killings; moreover, gun or no gun, people will kill for personal safety. In countries like america, where many people live in remote isolated places, guns are required to remain safe from burglars and wild animals. For these reasons, guns can’t be blamed for more number of killings as people will find another way to kill for personal safety.
Despite the logic that people will kill even without guns, I believe that with guns chances of killings increase. With guns, people have easy access to a tool, which kills and they don’t hesitate in using it. In america, for example, many people own guns and as per statistcs this has given rise to gun crimes and now the evil has reached schools as well. More guns have given rise to more killings and shootings.
this essay argued that as the ownership of guns increase proportionately shootings also increase. In my opinion, it is absolutely true that number of guns give rise to number of shootings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69259259259 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38636099383 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477777777778 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.73571956 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4615384615 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243996855842 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114109328521 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541676254348 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176500354626 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410590173677 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.