As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support your points of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
As medical care improves and the life expectancy of men and women increases, there are a number of consequences that will arise for future generations. Some of these will be beneficial, but some could cause issues.
Most people would like to live longer, provided they can maintain a good quality of life. This requires good health, money and the desire to participate in an active lifestyle. some elderly people have had the opportunity through their working life to save for their retirement, while others may be fit, healthy and enthusiastic about working well into their sixties or seventies. For all these people, living longer is likely to be a positive experience.
however, there are other elderly people who have not been able to provide for their old age or who, despite improved medical care, struggle to lead a healthy life. My grandfather, for example, was a builder all his life. He never managed to save for his retirement and despite medication to stabilize his health problems, he is unable to continue working. For him, old age is a constant worry.
As far as society is concerned, another negative consequence of people living longer is the effect this could have on the workplace. Currently, most people retire in their sixties and this allows the younger generation to move into the jobs they have left. As people stay on at work, the turnover of jobs declines making more difficult for younger people to get work.
On balance, I believe that improving medical care in order to extend life expectancy is a good thing. However, governments must ensure that young people are not deprived of jobs and that old people who cannot support themselves are well looked after.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70638297872 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48073062735 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6865279349 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0769230769 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36060093252 0.242375264174 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127308077284 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055580328453 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182964286307 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319245897308 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.