Recently, the phenomenon of shooting enhancements in some countries and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that having a gun at home cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that increases in the number of shootings can be negative, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to disagree with having a gun in the house. At first, it is very helpful to defense the home against the thefts by personal gun. However, gun-owning is very dangerous for societies. For example, an increase in the number of gunfire in schools and personal revenge are the results of the free gun in countries.
In addition, the gun industry depends on the light weapons that purchase by ordinary people. But, developments in gun industry made many people as criminals. From a scientific research undertaken by a reputable university, a significant number of prisoners are those people who judged for gun crimes. Thus, new legislation and gun prohibitions from the governments are required.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments of this topic, I profoundly believe that the drawbacks of holding guns at homes of many people far outweighed its benefits, Not only for the family, also for the all members of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14592274678 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00402819199 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605150214592 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7956524472 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9166666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270637088235 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914122737607 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391623979337 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150077682268 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03936301781 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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