Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives. • automobiles • bicycles • airplanes Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The invention of automobiles have great influence in people's lives and help them in most of the situations. Even Though some people believe that the modernism lead to many negative effects, i to great extent agree with the invention and best effects of airplanes. my statement will be categorized in 2 reasons.
to begin with, airplanes omit the distance in many cases. as an example, i want to apply for a Phd program in the university of chicago and i'm going to live there. the distance between me and my family is about 12000 km. but i can fly in a 12 hours and be at home.
additionally airplane have few air pollution, and more capacity for people transforming. for making clear this issue, you can imagine a road with about 100 cars, and a sky with only one airplane to transfer 1000 people. which one you prefer ?
in conclusion the invention of all of automobiles help to transportation but in my opinion airplane has most effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, in conclusion, in many cases, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 1977.66487455 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 407.700716846 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67469879518 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78179644843 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 618.680645161 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7799733659 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5454545455 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10186954694 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393031433744 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038464345505 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608283141327 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401583618825 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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