The college years are the best time in a person’s life.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
I strongly believed that everyone should attend university or college because nowadays definition of qualified person has changed and it depends on graduated person. While they attend to college or university, they acquaintance with different people and with some of them forge a friendship.
I can make you sure that best time in our life passes during the school and university time. Because classmates become a family for you, one or two become your secret box that you share every moment of your day. First of all, while you are classmates you will spend time to do homework, researchers together. It seems like a boring task but while you are doing it with your friends then it could be memorable time. Secondly, while you are free you will hang out with your peers at night for a restaurant or for having a crazy day. These moments will not be forgotten or never will be revealed to another person.
Apart from spending time with friends, university life will make you familiar with life rules. University life full of with rocky moments, and every student who lives college life learn to take this liability, they learn how to work and learn how to achieve their goals. Even small time management can be learned during university life.
In a conclusion, apart from harvesting knowledge university will help you to have the better life and ready for life. These moments will be unbelievable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will never be
... These moments will not be forgotten or never will be revealed to another person. Apart fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89539748954 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50241388339 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569037656904 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9345229665 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282844795214 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107622134516 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540490183419 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156167605086 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614310923958 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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