college years are the best time in person's life
We divide a person's life to several parts, these parts are as like as writing essays which have an introduction, a body and a conclusion. I mean that the introduction is birth to a ten year old, the body is ages between a ten to a sixty year old, and a conclusion is the last part of human's life.
First of all, a time of early ages of youngs, these time shows us several learning abilities, and these abilities come from families and friends. In this time of the life, the children always learn new things about anything, this sometimes causes borings to individuals. Some of the children would be hate this experiments.
The second part of person's life have a wide time which human can consume. A few part of a big part of life is college years. The children have much more abilities than before, and they had been gotten good behaviours, and they sometimes think having a girlfriend or a boyfriend. In these times, they want to be more social, because they can think positive parts of life than their school.
The last part of life is after sixty years old, while in this time of life, people more slow than before life, they always want to be a relax, and they usually live in their homes. this part is the slowest part of human's life.
In my opinion, taking account of all this reasons, the best time of the person's life is college years, because people have more positive feelings and experiments in their life.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-01-23 | prakriti malla | 60 | view |
| 2022-12-03 | Hrushikesh_Vaddoriya | 3 | view |
| 2022-12-03 | Hrushikesh_Vaddoriya | 60 | view |
| 2022-10-16 | nusybah | 60 | view |
| 2020-01-15 | Kalima | 60 | view |
- Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live. 66
- Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Some people like to save extra money Other people prefer to spend it right away Which do you prefer to do 70
- Some people believe that employment over the age of 60 is not right and creates lots of problems. So people should retire after 60 and not work.agree/disagree 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
We divide a persons life to several parts, these parts are ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as like as writing essays which have an introduction, a body and a conclusion. I...
^^
Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ometimes causes borings to individuals. Some of the children would be hate this experiments...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: 'few parts'.
Suggestion: few parts
... a wide time which human can consume. A few part of a big part of life is college years....
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yfriend. In these times, they want to be more social, because they can think posi...
^^
Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...han before life, they always want to be a relax, and they usually live in their homes. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
..., and they usually live in their homes. this part is the slowest part of humans life...
^^^^
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... all this reasons, the best time of the persons life is college years, because people h...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, i mean, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49034749035 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36963115935 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.944412257 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9166666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300993881099 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118103695979 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878471863553 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185555923615 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714001644318 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.