A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
There are many advantages and disadvantages to build a large factory near our neighborhood. From my point of view, I support a view of building a factory near our community because building a factory causes job opportunity and lessens cost. However, air pollution and rapid growth of population are disadvantages.
Advantages of building a large company near our community are employment and reduction of expenses. Large companies needs many employees from different type of worker such as simple worker for doing easy jobs as well as expert worker in skillful vacancies. As a result, this makes that many people have a career. In addition, people do not have to pay money for the transportation. For example, in our district, the large factory was established and our neighbors as well as my brothers worked there. They do not spend in traffic and arrive on time to the work. This is big advantage of being large company near our community.
In contrast, building a factory near our neighborhood causes air pollution. Factories produce significant amount of smug and harmful material gas like carbon dioxid as well as water pollution. For example, our neighbor company produce sanitary produce and they use a lot of water from rivers. As a result, they make rivers dirt and polluted and will cause to death of many aquatic animals including fish and other animals.
As mentioned, the population will growth rapidly. This is not only by settlement of the workers of company but also people from other region. People from other cities will come to live since there are not many people and streets are quiet. For example, we have lived here for 2 years and there were few people settled down in our local but since establishment of the company population growth rapidly to 30 thousand people. This might cause to strict traffic in street.
In sum, there are some disadvantage in constructing factory in near neighborhood. However, higher employment for people and reduction of expenses are the positive side. I support to plan in building a large factory here.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...munity because building a factory causes job opportunity and lessens cost. Howeve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00290697674 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76226889746 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491279069767 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1219239303 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2272727273 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215897125572 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795847695062 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846670867831 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141234151771 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708634801502 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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