A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
I will support to the build a large factory, every community wants development and if a company decided to build a large factory near my community then for sure it brings development. And also gets new opportunities for the job.
The advantage of building a factory near the community is first, a new factory means it needs labor and also it opens new job opportunities. Some people in a community who wants a job near their homes will get opportunities to apply there. Additionally, New factory means there is a huge development in the surrounding area, the growth of the market will increase and that it will profitable for those who run business also, the government gets interested to the development of the nearby area, for example, the road construction and street light, etc. It brings the opportunity for youth who recently completed their education. After that, some other different businesses start to grow up and that will help to get better financial conditions.
But with advantages, there are some disadvantages, in a factory, there are tons of chemicals used and that produces poison gas which caused air pollution and that impact on people health’s also not it not only caused air pollution but also water pollution. Another disadvantage is an increase in population when the factory is building the labor worker will come from outside in a quest of job and then because of that population will increase.
Moreover, I feel that neglecting some disadvantages there are lots of advantages because of every city and towns get development and development brings positive changes. The pos important thing is because of the lack of job people get frustrated nowadays and building a new factory will get a different opportunity for the job.
Therefore, building a factory is brings a positive change in my community and because of that, I support this idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'wants'' or 'want's'?
Suggestion: wants'; want's
... build a large factory, every community wants development and if a company decided to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03525641026 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95692836877 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464743589744 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6215456245 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.916666667 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151470163599 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682878791133 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682304921546 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106633711185 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427234986849 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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