A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
As the global economy has enlarged, the power of the company which sells and makes the product worldwide, such as, General Motors, P&G and Amazon, is increasing. if a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near my community, I strongly support the factory. I would like to explain the reasons to my opinion with the advantages and disadvantages.
To begin with, there are two merits that the factory affects the community. First, if the company builds the numerous new factory, they need the employees who can work there. Therefore, in the economic point, they will cause a good effect in the local community. Second, the new factory will pay the company tax to the local city hall and state tax. it will help the local goverment to fix the road and build the new education program for the local area.
There are also demerits by a construction of the new factory. Some researchers say that the big factory will bring the high crime rate in the city. As new blue color workers who work at the company are emerging, there are not only good neighborhood but also bad neighborhood who move to the city from any area in the states. In addition, since the workers tend to work in the big company, the small business in the town will be concern about the loss of the worker. In the worst case, they will be bankrupt by the appearance of the factory.
However, the demerits of the new factory are limited, as the city government can prevent from the increasing of the crime rates and fewer workers in the city by constituting the new local policy and hiring the polices.
In conclusion, the new factory will bring the advantages and disadvantage. As I mention above, I strongly agree with the merit of the effect of the emergence of the new factory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64444444444 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52604672731 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0072538379 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4375 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210625381598 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801312198746 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897737610236 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125118911291 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066377890497 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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