Some people prefer to eat at food stand or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
What is one difference between a good friend and very good friend? To me, that is food. When I can get along very well with someone, the person always loves eating food. It means we can share our common interest three times in a day. Eating food is that much important activity to me. In fact, I would say I am thinking about food half of a day. However, there is another problem. Eating outside or Cooking at home. My answer is I prefer cooking at home. I would like to explain the reasons.
First, I simply love cooking. I cook everyday and I have never bored because I love that. In addition, since I have allergy of some specific foods, I have to avoid them. Cooking by myself is the easiest way to not eating those foods. Even if I have allergy of some foods, I have infinitive choices if I cook by myself, for example, I can only use organic foods and low calorie foods. Plus, cooking is actually very good opportunity to communicate with new people. I am very interested to learn how to cook foods from other countries such as Mexico, China, Thai, Italy and Japan. When I meet someone who is from another country, my first question to them is always about foods. I usually ask them to cook authentic foods in their home country, and cook together the food. It not only helps us to be closer, but I also can learn their culture through the experience.
Second, cooking at home is cheaper and healthier than eating outside. It is not hard to imagine I spend thousands of dollars in very short term if I eat every meal in restaurants. If I cook at home, I just need to pay for ingredients of our dish, so I don’t need to pay any extra money such as service fee or chip. Adding with it, foods in restaurants are usually more high calories than home foods since they use a lot of fat. Especially fast foods store provides incredibly high calories foods. It affects to our health badly, you not only gain your weight but you could get serious health problems. I concern those fast foods are especially not good for children. So in my opinion, every parents should know how to cook, in order to avoid giving only fast foods to their kids.
In Conclusion, I prefer to cook at home more than eating outside. I am very passionate to learn new recipes from other countries, and it helps to build friendship. Plus, if I cook at home, I can save money and stay being healthy. What a perfect way to stay happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38839285714 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34924525847 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8830259503 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4375 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28125 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256055220201 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719275920952 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779038338457 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172648664183 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524860101951 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 10.002688172 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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