Compare and contrast the way of your life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying for the next generations?
World changes so fast that we may not believe it. Science, technology, psychology and medicine are few aspects of life revolution. Different generations experience different situations, hobbies, ideas and customs which is strange and unaccustomed for others. Nor my generation’s way of life neither my parents’ is satisfying for the next generations.
First of all, technology invents modern devices and new method of handling tasks. For example, my parents’ generation had to search their needs among books or ask the knowledgeable people whereas we easily find a lot of proper answers for our questions via Internet less than ten minutes. I am pretty sure that Silicon Valley will show something new for next generation which is more satisfying. Therefore, people should stick to their specific decade’s conditions and technology.
Furthermore, science and psychology are trying to discover new aspect of human and world. For instance, 3o years ago parents thought that discipline is the first rule of bringing up a baby even from the first day. However, psychologist proved that true love is the most important thing that parents should give their infants. Skin to skin contact method is one of the results of this research. Thus, if we want to have a happy and sound baby, we must adjust ourselves to the newest science.
Admittedly, there are some excellent costumes that people had in the past while they are weakening these days. People meet each other regularly and the rate of depression was significantly lower than present. Although men and women had to do drudgery duties, they helped neighbors and families when their schedules were empty. Nevertheless, we can eliminate this concern, if we teach children how to contribute and communicate.
To wrap up, in my opinion, each descendant belongs to specific way of live so we cannot force them to obey the past ones. The reason of our lives is to propel world and make it somewhere nicer for living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...;s way of life neither my parents' is satisfying for the next generations. First of a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19254658385 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91600188808 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658385093168 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9851939431 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143143854244 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373418278473 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587837588006 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776022167466 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736744298071 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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