Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, the development of technology makes everything change and progress from the past. So, these make the way of our lives change from the way of our parents' lives. The way of our life is more competitive and more convenient.
The first thing that I feel the difference between my way of life and my parent of life is the competition in the society. I have to compete with other people since I was in an elementary school. I have to study hard to enter in a good school and I have to participate in extra activities because it is popular that children have the special skills such as speaking foreign languages, playing music instruments or having sports skills. So, I have to do whatever people in that day were doing. It has less chance to have time play with a friend and don't have to think about our future like my parents' lives. However, I understand that why most parents have to push their children. The world is changing from the past and people have increased much more than the past. If you want to survive in this community, you have to be better off than other people.
The second thing is that the development of technology makes my life more convenient than my parents' lives. I have a cell phone that communicates with whoever anytime. I can use the internet to find whatever information I want. I can drive a car to go anywhere in less time than the past. I don't have to cook by myself because I can buy fresh food in the supermarket.
However, there is the same in the way of parents' lives and my life. It is the feeling of human among families, friends. We want to love and get love back. We also want to have the good thing happen in our families. This is the thing that is never changed by the time.
In conclusion, the technology not only makes our lives easier but also make them more stressful. However, the feeling of human never change.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21164021164 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.177248677249 0.158761421928 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0687830687831 0.0866891130778 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0529100529101 0.046263068375 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0925925925926 0.0685040099705 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121693121693 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0185185185185 0.0351676179071 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46517606829 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0396825396825 0.0309702414327 128% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0952380952381 0.0887237588012 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00793650793651 0.0209618222197 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015873015873 0.0139019557991 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1879.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 345.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44637681159 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.249275362319 0.338922669872 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.185507246377 0.251872472559 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.121739130435 0.174417080927 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0811594202899 0.112833075102 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46517606829 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475362318841 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.77984463 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2637805314 48.84282405 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6956521739 120.699889404 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.434782608696 0.644075263715 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 33.5507246377 45.7405998639 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.09016393443 1.45489161554 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241027024705 0.300154397459 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118255977715 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0952413453953 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512464425447 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125520121495 0.151897553556 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987271551733 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642191912148 0.0781384742642 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.363554365855 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0963824579045 0.067059652881 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16064636715 0.210909579961 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644528004272 0.0618886996521 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.