Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?
use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
'The way of life' has a broad meaning within itself. Every person has a different way of life. Every person defines it differently. But, ultimately, the answer or the main purpose is 'how one can be always happy'. Every child is inspired by its parents. He/She learns the meaning of life from them and at some extend, child observes its parents' way of life and try to absorb some of the things. However, due to generation gap, a point comes when parents and their children have different way of life.
For example, if I give an example of my own, then I should say there is a little difference between my parents' way of life and my way of life. My parents are down to earth and spend less time doing unimportant things. For my father, 'party' is not going out with friends and have a dinner and spend much time till late night doing nothing. For him, 'party' is spending quality time with his family and be helpful in my mother's home cleaning work or to be helpful in his children's study or playing indoor and outdoor games with them on Sunday. My opinion is also somewhat similar. I usually prefer to spend quality time with are near ones rather than spending time in just outing.
My mother's way of life also affects me more. She is always ready to try new dishes for her family and give her crucial time to her children apart from her busy schedule. She doesn't care about herself, rather, she takes care for everyone else in the family and handles very effectively all the difficult situations even if she hardly gets time from her job. She is the moral support for us.
Basically, my parents believe that if we do something for other people rather than our own happiness, we will be more happy and satisfied. My meaning of 'way of life' contrasts here at some point. I cannot always be happy if I don't do more for myself. But, at bottom of my heart, I know the values of my parents' way of life and how they indirectly teach me an important lesson in the life.
In my opinion, if the future generations understand the way of life which my parents' have, then it will be more beneficial for them. Because if the future generation will think for their own personal gain and benefits, then no one will help another one and people will become more selfish, which will be harmful for them only. So, it's better that people understand the important values and adopt them in their life and pass on to their future generation. It will lead to their betterment and happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, apart from, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45474613687 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26515453267 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479028697572 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2771690129 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.72 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.12 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235221976726 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826739244021 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632404174852 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139922913783 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510541217443 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.