Country and town life
The place and its environment that we choose to live is very important and relies on the life-style of each person. For instance, the people that avoid hectic life, like some quiet place to live, and also rely on nature environment to be relax, intend to live in country. Whereas a lot people prefer country life, but I – for a one- subscribe to the view that the town life is more profitable because of its higher facilities, bigger chance to find appropriate job, and more state-of-the-art educational centers to improve our skills.
In the modern life-style with its complex condition like severity in financial and social aspects of life, the people are vulnerable to get some serious physical and mental problems, they need some modern health care services like hospital with expertized doctors that it will find only in town not in country. They can get a hospital before it comes too late unlike countries which have high death rate due to the lack of proper medicinal services. Also, even without any emergency circumstance, people must be under the treatments of some reliable doctors and psychologists occasionally in order to handle their life in a healthy and guaranteed way.
Furthermore, one another important thing for everyone is their job. Every person who gets some educational or intends to some class by reason of improving their skill, has an ultimate goal, what I mean is finding a good job related to their experts. In town, chance of people for response to the very their goals is very higher in comparison to country. Also, there are more both governmental and private companies that people can attend to, in addition there are more bed, because of more demand made by more its population, to go ahead to their favorites and create new job rely on these. But in country, there are only some limit choices in a way that it is hard to people to work on their favorite job.
Undoubtedly, as the quality of life goes to increase, the knowledge of people toward their ability enhance too. So, people know that they have a few intelligences which they must practice on to improve and use them in their life. Some of these intelligences are in art fields, sports filed and so on. Everyone who wants to improve these dimension of their minds, need some advanced classes with skillful teachers that will find only in towns not in countries.
In sum, with all taken into account, I think that the town is a better choice to live compared to country; it can give good chance to people to have some assurance condition to get healthy services, find appropriate jobs, and promote their skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, whereas, for instance, i mean, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79600886918 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60007302637 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518847006652 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6172571996 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.1875 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1875 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213391860355 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710100328277 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717546519674 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134267387671 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886480109585 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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