Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Do you agree with the statement or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Dance is believed to date back to many centuries ago. They can have religious significance or be used for storytelling. They could also be simply a form of entertainment and celebration. Either way, I believe that dance is an important part of culture and can tell us a lot about it, being unique to every region.
First of all, as I said, dance can help in visual storytelling. Traditional dances might be choreographed to relate mythical or ancient stories. For example, dances in India include movements that tell stories about their Gods. They can also be used to show religious rituals as can be seen in old carvings on cave walls.
Other than storytelling, dancing makes use of traditional music, traditional musical instruments and costumes. These can vary with the region and occasions, such as weddings and birth. This can tell us what the occasion is just by listening to the music or just by looking at the type of dance. When people prepare to dance, they dress up in traditional clothes and play traditional music, which they may not do otherwise. This brings them closer to their culture and helps them understand it better.
In short, I believe that dance is a crucial part of culture as it can tell stories about the region, its history and beliefs. Dance is also unique to every occasion and region, and helps identify a culture. Dance can also help us understand a culture while also being a form of amusement.
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Dancing plays an important…
Dancing plays an important role in my life because it allows me to express emotions, feel freedom and connect with art. It is not only a form of self-expression, but also a way to develop physical endurance and flexibility. For example, https://artdeballet.com/blue-tutu-ballet/ emphasises the beauty of dance and helps dancers feel confident on stage, adding grace to every movement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, while, for example, in short, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 248.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81451612903 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72125741809 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3832705957 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.625 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10360930854 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387005758373 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305466773741 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702092540926 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160276726719 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.