Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Considering decision making quickly or after careful thought, I am strongly inclined to take the side of the statement that appropriate decisions always are made by the deep contemplation. Being one of the most proliferated psychological subjects, the capability of a person to make the correct decision after long thought categorically is preferred instead of the quick wrong decision. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, making decision is highly depends on the surrounding situations. I dramatically believe that the careful though is remarkably associated with considering all crucial incidences of events. For example, in all critical situations such as natural disasters, violent demonstrations, country wars, etc, the government holds the critical committee to make the impressive, through, and appropriate decisions considering all aspects of the disaster. This derive from this viewpoint that the responsible should confide that all members' recommendations are considered. It is crystal clear that making a wrong quick decision can bring about aggravating situations. Thus, the main advantage of careful thought for making decision can be attributed to deep contemplation of all possible cases to prevent any additional danger and use correct preemptive actions.
Another primary reason can be ascribed to the psychological source of making quick decision. As the current scientific reports reveal, making the quick decisions frequently originate from the initial reaction of persons which catalyze their emotional behaviors. This can be indicated as a substantial disadvantage of making quick decisions.
Aside from the points I made above, by practicing as well as reinforcing some psychological capabilities such as rage control, being patient, etc, making the appropriate decision can achieve in the shorter time. This does not mean that the share of careful though should be decreased, but means the mind arrangement to bring up the correct decision improved.
Taking all this perspectives into account, I cannot agree more about making appropriate decisions after careful thought regarding the through considerations and preventing the emotional behaviors. Although, the speed is considered as a noticeable factor in critical cases, to my best knowledge, this cannot indicate as a subject to ignore the careful though.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76044568245 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16008334337 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551532033426 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1973418863 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385597913559 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133990884856 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795672822794 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223655142593 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865922887529 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 10.9000537634 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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