Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions people make quickly are always wrong.
Decisions will always depend on the person's personality and confidence. Some people do not think of the negative effects that a quick decision can have. Every person should not forget that every decision taken today shapes their future.
To begin with, decisions can be made quickly, yet there are few points that sometimes people forget to look up. First, it is important to have a backup plan, no matter if the decision is big or small. Secondly, it is necessary to plan what to do if something goes wrong. Thirdly, it is vital to think about the weight of the pros and cons of any decision before.
For instance, if someone wants to invest in a franchise, they should consider the pros and cons that this decision may bring. Investing in a franchise will always sound interesting because a franchise is already popular and has built a good reputation through the years. Nevertheless, this decision can impact people's economic stability. In fact, the franchise might have a good reputation, but its success depends on the location, pace, organization of this new business. Decisions like this cannot be made quickly because the losses can be remarkable. Sometimes opportunities knock on people’s doors, and they do not want to miss the chance.
Secondly, even the smallest decisions can have consequences on one's future. For instance, when young adults decide to smoke one cigarette a day, they might feel cool and satisfy their ego at the moment. However, in time, this habit becomes difficult to give up and it can go on and on. Consequently, young adults can develop illnesses in the long run such as lung cancer, heart issues, and stroke. This is why I believe that decisions should be made with caution and careful thoughts to prevent any unpleasant outcome.
Overall, it is necessary to acquire information from different sources to make sure that the decision won’t impact one’s future negatively before making it. The better way to approach a new decision is to consider all the possibilities and giving oneself sometimes if it is possible. Due to the fact that every decision shapes one’s future, it is fundamental to think cautiously before taking an action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
Decisions will always depend on the persons personality and confidence. Some people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00821917808 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68857734017 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572602739726 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6504202211 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0476190476 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.380952381 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38326069332 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110332846878 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101023674545 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204122242122 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543830884951 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.