There are many objects around us completing our mundane work. For example washing machines for our laundry, fridge to store food materials, vacuum cleaner to clean the house as well as many other smaller gadgets like air conditioner and television. But according to my point of view there is one more object we use extensively, that is mobile phones.
For me its as important as basic needs like food, shelter and clothing because of following reasons. while some might oppose this by saying its as addiction. Its very true that before mobile was very simple. I am affirmative with above statement but discovery of mobile has fastened our lives. Multiple tasks can be done by using this small gadget. Initially mobile phone were means of contacting each other only but development in programming added whole new features to mobile phone. Features included are calculators, various food delivery and online shopping application, internet, social media apps, various educational and banking applications, maps.
From above given features three are most important firstly maps. Every time I visit unknown places maps help me find right directions and helps me reaching my destination. its feature of showing live status of traffic always i found useful. The chances of being lost have been reduced by 90 % after having mobile phone. If I am travelling alone by taxi by tracking myself I can be at safer side and if I start to feel something wrong might happen with me, sharing location feature is very supportive. Once I forgot prepare my presentation of seminar. I used my mobile and prepared it within an hour and presented quickly. I don't know what i would have done without my mobile phone.
Various application like banking through mobile has saved lots of our and bankers time. We can transact our money immediately when needed by reducing chances of hard cash theft cases. Through social media apps we can contact any person from any corner of the world. Another feature of internet has given new wings to everyone by single click u can get every information in your palm. Some educational apps are available that are helping people to get online education. Laptop is not affordable by everyone so mobiles are being alternative to laptop.
Above thoughts suggest that mobile is crucial thing of my life. I study by staying away from my home. when I found myself lonely I can reach my parents over mobile withing few seconds. I don't think that anyone could replace mobiles in my life.
- TP0 40 - Integrated 3
- You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice. 60
- Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments? 83
- Does modern technology make life more convenient or was life better when technology was simple? 76
- Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... clothing because of following reasons. while some might oppose this by saying its as...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... while some might oppose this by saying its as addiction. Its very true that before...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reach' or 'reach'.
Suggestion: to reach; reach
...p me find right directions and helps me reaching my destination. its feature of showing ...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...s and helps me reaching my destination. its feature of showing live status of traff...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'traffic'.
Suggestion: always traffic
.... its feature of showing live status of traffic always i found useful. The chances of being lo...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...f showing live status of traffic always i found useful. The chances of being lost...
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Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng location feature is very supportive. Once I forgot prepare my presentation of sem...
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Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...within an hour and presented quickly. I dont know what i would have done without my ...
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Line 5, column 640, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and presented quickly. I dont know what i would have done without my mobile phone...
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Line 9, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
.... I study by staying away from my home. when I found myself lonely I can reach my pa...
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Line 9, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... I study by staying away from my home. when I found myself lonely I can reach my pa...
^^^^
Line 9, column 188, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ents over mobile withing few seconds. I dont think that anyone could replace mobiles...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96420047733 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55273629367 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618138424821 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.319015368 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2857142857 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9642857143 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.60714285714 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834177151185 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0220463008439 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257960917185 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457091429466 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232287048117 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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