These days, people enjoy a lot of time away from their work and school obligations. Many people use this time to visit new places and learn about them. What do u think is the best way to learn about them. What do u think about them. What do u think is the

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Visiting
visiting new place always brings joy. There are ...
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Suggestion: If
...There are some risk involved with trip. if I am visiting foreign countries then fi...
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...There are some risk involved with trip. if I am visiting foreign countries then fi...
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Suggestion: Visiting
...dle I will face is cultural difference. visiting place to know them is one of the greate...
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Suggestion: If
...reatest mesmerizing experience of life. if I had chance to design my trip myself I...
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...reatest mesmerizing experience of life. if I had chance to design my trip myself I...
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Suggestion: this thing; these things
...ural beauty. Its very hard to cover all these thing within short period of time.Thats why, ...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...d to cover all these thing within short period of time.Thats why, for the first I will be choo...
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Suggestion: Thats
...these thing within short period of time.Thats why, for the first I will be choosing t...
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Suggestion: That's
...these thing within short period of time.Thats why, for the first I will be choosing t...
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Suggestion: Museum
...rst I will be choosing to visit museum. museum usually cover all aforementioned areas....
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Suggestion: This
...merican museum of natural History AMNH. this is one of the biggest museum of world. ...
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... is one of the biggest museum of world. After visiting we regreted our decision. I ha...
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Suggestion: Museum
... on first day instead of last day. museum reflects history of country. It give us...
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Suggestion: gives
... museum reflects history of country. It give us basic idea of not only culture but a...
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Suggestion: They
...ture but also research and development. they also show how to communicate with peopl...
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Line 9, column 325, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'informed'.
Suggestion: informed
...ty towards museum. Tour guides are also inform us about importance of place. Guides&ap...
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Suggestion: They
...tion about that specific location only. they do not cover wide information of that t...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...wide information of that their country. Furthermore shopping area has main drawback that th...
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Suggestion: If
...ack that they only cover economic area. if you don't know how to interact wit...
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Suggestion: Museum
...n chance of getting tricked are higher. museum covers all the drawbacks with proud. ...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...vers all the drawbacks with proud. Hence in conclusion, we can clearly see that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, in conclusion, in short, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.884375 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46826537965 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0225724272 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.52 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.12 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117596726968 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344070897914 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348251525897 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067824609767 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301207139335 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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