Many people believe that it ts very important to make large amounts ,of money, while . ,others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each view point and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your opinion.
satisfaction has its own defination. More money can satisfy greedy people but one like me might think that satisfaction lies within earning enough money for mundane works and satisfactory life. this type of mentality generally found in middle class where as other mentality found in ambisious oersonality. Going beyond community and its new claasification system is necessory. To understand a standard balanced life where we can have to keep aside money orianted apprach. there are people like Dr. Baba Aamate, Social worker who earned money that will be enough for living. after having copaciity to earn more money he choosed to have simple and satisfactory life. our history has proved that people will remember rich people when they are alive but they will remember altruist after their death also.
Personally, I have proclivity towards the thought that earning money that satisfy basic needs of daily life is more than enough. Out there somewhere in the world there are lots of people who don’t get food to eat or chance to earn. we are living in world where we have to move on together. we can not change mentality of people but our exaple will be inspiring them to do so.
Hence, after this holistic analysis we can clearly sea that both points have its own school of though but having satisfactory life is always better than greedy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95614035088 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47391360763 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600877192982 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8611721593 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9230769231 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12234862677 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454179691281 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443796560501 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762012948032 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472625345891 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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