Many people believe that it ts very important to make large amounts ,of money, while . ,others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each view point and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your opinion.
Two different perspective emerges while meticulously evaluating this issue. one perspective answers in the affirmative with utmost conviction where as other perspective denies its presence with logical reasoning.
Today's world is giving priority to earn more money. Society have class based on how much one is making money. To participate in this race people are rushing themselves. people think that money gives you not only prestige but also respect. Up to some extend this is true. celebrities having lots of money are considered as stronger candidate for films. Such celebrities getting paid more are likely to be famous in community. Its true that money drags money. If I have principle amount, I would invest it all and earn more. Many face difficult and poor childhood. this kind of situation generates mentality of earning more of cash. Due to these reasons most of people believe that getting lot is good.
Satisfaction has its own definition. More money can satisfy greedy people but one like me might think that satisfaction lies within earning enough money for mundane works and satisfactory life. this type of mentality generally found in middle class where as other mentality found in ambitious personality. Going beyond community and its new classification system is necessary. To understand a standard balanced life in which we can have to keep aside money oriented approach. there are people like Dr. Baba Aamate, Social worker who earned money that will be enough for living. after having capacity to earn more money he had choose to have simple and satisfactory life. our history has proved that people will remember rich people when they are alive but they will remember altruist after their death also.
Personally, I have proclivity towards the thought that earning money that satisfy basic needs of daily life is more than enough. Out there somewhere in the world there are lots of people who don’t get food to eat or chance to earn. we are living in world where we have to move on together. we can not change mentality of people but our example will be inspiring them to do so.
Hence, after this holistic analysis we can clearly sea that both points have its own school of though but having satisfactory life is always better than greedy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2839.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.47105263158 4.8611393121 154% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.85814810816 2.67179642975 294% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573684210526 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 812.7 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.51630824373 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.3749450619 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.148148148 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0740740741 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.48148148148 5.45110844103 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0328483122244 0.236089414692 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0235913442008 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248686351699 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0168791250266 0.150856017488 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018325585494 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 11.7677419355 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 58.1214874552 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.7 10.1575268817 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 25.45 10.9000537634 233% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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